Old HouseAge once passed as wisdom. Peeling paint meant pay attention. A poem for this age.Apr 11, 2026572ShareDan Meyers @UnSplashNot much to look at,It once turned a head.Fixer-upper on a streetGone quiet, bypassed, relevantNo more as four-lane’sHiss pumps proudEfficiency.Attic crammed to hoarding: OnceCrucial files, photos capturedNow ceding to history’s haze.Walls and ceilings wrinkled,Dermal peeling, shedding,And shed again. Acned in youth, nowRutted, weathered by wisdomAnd life’s bronzing.Rafters once strewn withDross of youth now reekOf teachings,Most unheard, shaken,Dismissed as old and worn:Regret the cobwebsAnd price of pain.Fixtures creak…Rust.Replaced as needed, insured,Co-pays met, systemsAwait a next failedIf vital truss or timber.Plumbing leaks: NightlyTending needed. Once Lustful sluice shunted long since, nowLeaden pipes drip untapped,Duplicative dutyDone.Frosted windows Warp my view: ShadesSlid shut shieldHarsh light once blind To curb or limit.Furnace, once fired byGaseous flame, ifRuled by rash, unrulyTemps grows old, Cold, embers left unstirredNew winter come too soon.Yard silent, but forRumblings hushed withDaily meds, dosage writIn dusty corners of idled Bookends. Painted once, now dressed inChips and peels noSalve or fashion’s styptic longerHide. Roof sags,Long-worn slate ofStiffened tiles sportBrushed if ragged snowThick and dark in warmer years.In haunted bath and bedroom:Mirrors gone grey, reflectionsGhost, shimmering ifReady for an ancient glance.Floors slump andSag, purpled, bruisedBy leaps of joy, anger, Dance and dragOf untold passage, A lifetime’s comeAnd gone. ChaptersParsed of what is readAs history, a lived and loving tome,Witness to images stowed inAttic boxes, Parched paper, as faded ink reclinesIn a silent home.Thanks for reading Passing Thoughts! Subscribe for free to receive new posts and support my work.Subscribe
Your words reach deeply, like the roots of the trees and grasses in the photo.
I notice how much is still alive around the "old place."
I'm curious: how come you call your work "a poem for this age."?
Is it the age of 2026?
Is it the age of you?
Is it another age?
A lovely poem my friend!